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Alfred,your friend since the beginning of high school,was once again dragging you by the arm,not hard, but enough over to his house for another "wicked kick-butt party!" as he called them. Yes they were a blast,but you knew that his step brother Matthew was gonna be there,and lately you've grown to have a crush on the little Canadian.

He was so shy and sweet,smelling like maple syrup. Only problem was he was too quiet. Even his own brother would forget him. You wouldnt ever though. And you made sure Alfred didn't forget this Canadian's birthday either.

"________,c'mon dude! this is gonna be the sickest party yet! I planned it all myself for Mattew!" Alfred says,pulling you into the boys' house,already set up in red and white. You smiled to yourself. Mattie was going to flip, all this for him. "it looks good Al"

"Ahahahaha!" His hero laugh always made you giggle,  but you quickly turned to the door as everyone else came in,saying their "hi's" in they're native languages. Everyone,including Francis, Matthew's adopted father, came over for Matt's birthday.

You felt a tap on your shoulder and turned,seeing the Canadian, you're eyes widened. "H-happy birthday Matthew!" you say quickly,making everyone turn to you and the blushing boy. His American brother quickly yells out. "Aww Man! you ruined the surprise! Happy birthday Matt!"

With that everyone cheers and the party gets started,much to Matthew's dismay. He stuck close to you the whole night, and of course you didn't mind,blushing every now and again if he grabbed your arm or brushed sides with you. "_-______" he whispered, being it his normal tone.
"Yea?" you said turning your head to look at him. "I-i dont....i-i mean, thank you for coming"
he says,blushing and quickly looking away,making the most adorable face,you couldnt help but blush too. "no problem Mattie. It's your birthday after  all"
"Alright dudes and dudettes! Time for a kick-ass game!!! everyone gather round the hero!!!!" Alfred interupts you and pulls you and Matthew over,sitting you down. "vhat are ve going to play?" says one of the party goers. "Truth or Dare dudes! the totally best game in existance!"

Matthew and I both groan,knowing this isnt going to end well,for alot of us. But as usual, the self proclaimed "hero" got everyone involved. Sooner or later,someone had done something stupid or admitted something embarassing, like how Feliciano and Ludwig first kissed the day at the beach when every one else slept. At that admittance, Matt had giggled when Ludwig stuttered and shoved Feliciano away.

Next up, was you, and you had already taken a truth,so your next up was.."Dare" you say in responce to Francis's question. At that the frenchman gives a perverted smile and laughs. "ohonhonhonhon, my little _______ you have chosen a good one zen~" You cringe at the smile on his face, not expecting what he was going to say next.

"I dare you to...pull my son's curl and kiss him" I blush at the last part,not understanding about the curl. It was just a cute little cowlick that separated him from Alred...right? Turning to Matthew,you see him so red he matches his Canadian sweater and covering his curl. "Cmon Matt! ______ got dared! show the curl man!" Alfred looked like he was gonna leap across the group to grab the poor embarassed Canadian.

You lean into Matthew and gently pull his hands away. "its just a curl Mattie~ i-i'll be quick,sorry" Even so,your bright red face said you were nervous about being forced to kiss your crush.

You lean in and brush his hair off his forehead, going closer to the curl,but not touching it yet,then quickly peck his cheek, leaning away,face bright red. "oh my dear _________, you forgot zee curl~" the frenchman says again,leaning closer to say it in your ear.
" i-i know...i-im getting to that"

Poor Matt looked like he wanted to cry,pleading with his eyes for you not to pull the curl, but a dare was a dare,so you gently grabbed the curl and tugged just a bit,and immediately the Canadian stiffened and moaned quietly,eyes closing before opening again,glowing the magnificent shade of violet you have never seen before.

"__-______" he says in a deep tone, staring at you and blushed deeply,his eyes full of something youve never seen before "m-mon dieu,assez, s'il vous plaît! p-please let go" You quickly let go,accidentally pulling on it again as the loop gets caught in your fingers,making him blush and cover his mouth on another groan. He falls over panting against you,snuggling into your neck, as you and him blushing like mad.

You feel him kiss your neck,panting, as Alfred and Francis,plus a bunch of other partiers hoot and holler,quickly getting back into the game. Yet you and the little Canadian, completely oblivioss to the world,just sit there, calming your racing hearts.

"______, u-umm...would you like to....m-maybe...go get some pancakes sometime?...w-with me?" You hear him whisper and you quickly turn to him,blushing. All you could do was nod and smile.

Who knew that a dare could get you the sweetest truth of all.
so heres my first ever reader fanfiction!!!! omg!! ever since i started reading them, i HAD to make one!

and who better to start with than my adorable little Canada! :iconadorablecanadaplz: i love him so much!

anyway! i hope you like it! i hope to write more soon,and get better at it...im not used to writing PG ones xDD let alone reader inserts
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:iconhetalialoverivy:
hetalialoverivy Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015
the cuuuurrrrllll (((((C:
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:iconakirasuya:
Akirasuya Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015  Student General Artist
Um alot of problems with this story.
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lily54541 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Mmmmmmm. Pancakes.
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YOUKAI-INU-DA-FURRY Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015  Student Artist
When it said deep voice, i thought about Morgan Freeman.... Weirdo me
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:iconpigeonpickle:
PigeonPickle Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  New Deviant
I just read that sentence in his voice.

We're both weirdos.
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IrisLam Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
i can smell youAll the raeg av 
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dawnsoffreedom Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Me to lol
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:iconstars-of-sorrow:
Stars-of-Sorrow Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2015  Student
100% here dude
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:iconpinkiepie11219:
PinkiePie11219 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I did too *laughs for days*
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:iconjelsa-and-books-rock:
*shakes Alfred* AHHHHH!!!! AWWWWWWWW!!!!:happybounce: Love 
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:iconamytheone:
AmyTheOne Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
France: I dare you... to pull my sons cu-
Me: *grabs curl quickly and tugs on it*
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:iconmy1poodle:
My1poodle Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
Awwwwwwwwwww
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:iconloveanime202:
loveanime202 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
thank you France for that dare!!
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Fluffykitty134 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2015
Can you not.
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fulletal-souleater2 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'm sorry if this has been an inconvenience to you this was a stupid mistake on my part and I'm trying to get rid of them so thank you for telling me so I can get rid of it..
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Fluffykitty134 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2015
Mmmkay sorry.
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:iconfulletal-souleater2:
fulletal-souleater2 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Its ok! Itcwas my fault..
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Fluffykitty134 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015
FnaF Icon [58] - Sad Safra GIF Gravity Falls - Celestabellebethabelle GIF Gravity Falls - Celestabellebethabelle 
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AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
YANK THAT CURL AGAIN GIRL.
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CeNedraUndomiel Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: no
Girl: do u even like me?
Boy: no
Girl: would u cry if I walked away?
Boy: no
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes. The boy grabbed her arm.
Boy: your not pretty..... Your beautiful
Boy: I don't want to be with u forever..... I need to be with you forever
Boy: I wouldn't cry if you walked away..... I die if you walked away
Boy whispers: plz stay with me
Girl: I will....
*tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves you
*something good will happen to you at 1-4pm
*tomorrow it will be anywhere!!
*get ready for the shock of your life!
*if u don't post this to 5 other comments.... You will have BAD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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shywerido Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist
Welp. I dont believe in this stuff but im gonna do it anyway.
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EpicCatBomb Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015   Digital Artist
This is just stupid spam, I don't see the appeal.
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CeNedraUndomiel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
exactly why i did it...
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Delilinna Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
France: "I dare you to... pull my son's curl and kiss him"

Me: *looks at Mattie* "Mattie, I am so sorry about this!" *quickly leans over, tugs the curl and kisses him hard before puling away, blushing, and running full speed out of the room*
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The-Writer-730 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I would seriously not end there and have Canada pick you up and rush you to a bedroom

But that's just me
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015
I like that better
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hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I WOULD NOT FUCKING HESITATE TO KISS 'M AND PULL HIS CURL I WOULD GO STRAIGHT FOR IT HOLY SHIT THIS WAS AWSHOME~
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amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Student General Artist
2p!Me: AH MY LITTLE MAPLE LEAF! *Glomps Canada*
Me: I really need to stop you from reading these things *siping coke while drawing
2p!Me: Well I don't stop you from reading Russia lemons *pokes out tongues*
Me: *Spits out coke on drawing* I do not read those! *Quickly exits tab on Russia lemon on laptop*
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Bandanasquad2nd Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS COMMENT MADE MY DAY
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amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student General Artist
2p!Me: Oh? How?
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hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
France: i dare u 2 pull my sons cur-
Me:*interupts by imediately pulling the curl*
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1stYaoiFanatic Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*Trying to read this undeteceted* OMG *Fails miserably as I am unable to contain my smiles, resulting in my phone to be taken away* D:
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CookieMasterz Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
Omagawsh! It's so kawaii!
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MioSutcliffe Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
OMG yesterday I had a Italy curl and my friend pulled it I actually moaned *_* I'm the real Hetalia :P
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MelodyTheBunneh Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2015
You're not the only one...
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Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn.
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ChocolatMelloFangirl Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU JACKWAGON, ITS NOT GERMITA ITS GERITA!
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blonde-kitten-otaku Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student General Artist
ok i wrote this many years ago and did not realize it was GerIta at the time
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MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
GERMITA! I SHIP IT SO HARD!
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SageXEyelessJack Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
YESSS~!Italy (Happy) [V1] 
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YellowVixen Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you gotta wonder what will happen if that hair accidentally gets pulled out.....
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Theanimefan123 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I've always wondered the same FrUKing thing!
Would he be, like, way turned on until it grows back?
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YellowVixen Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Or have no sexual desire at all...?
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Theanimefan123 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm...
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EzioBronyFan Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Photographer
Well...im not saying its bad but on some sentences you misspelled some words like : alred-alfred,Mattew-Matthew... Sorry if i sound like im critisizing if i spelled that correctly...other than that it so KAWAII
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supergirl0987 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Daaaaw!
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cake-sauce Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Filmographer
:iconovariesplz: I know, I know, I liked it. And when I read something about my Hetalia crush, I can't control them. 
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Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
All I say is 'Hot Damn!'
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cake-sauce Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student Filmographer
YESSS ah memories when I liked Hetalia 
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